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Haikus
Apr 2, 2007 16:08:22 GMT -5
Post by madandfrozen on Apr 2, 2007 16:08:22 GMT -5
Chatty chatty girl always loves to talk and talk. Will you please shut up?
lol, somebody else said I should've written it like this: Girl chatty chatty always loves to talk and talk. Please will you shut up?
what do you guys think?
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Haikus
Apr 2, 2007 16:09:49 GMT -5
Post by Lady Hammer on Apr 2, 2007 16:09:49 GMT -5
I really like that! Haikus are underrated, I think, because they have potential to be really funny / cute / beautiful / whatever. I like this one. It was amusing. ^^ Both versions sound good to me.
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Haikus
Apr 2, 2007 16:11:28 GMT -5
Post by madandfrozen on Apr 2, 2007 16:11:28 GMT -5
Thankies ^^ I saw a funny one on tv, but I don't believe it would be very appropriate to post ^^
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Haikus
Apr 3, 2007 2:14:49 GMT -5
Post by Jordy on Apr 3, 2007 2:14:49 GMT -5
It's so cute! I like it your version better. Good job. I agree, haikus are underrated. I find them hard to write...
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Haikus
Apr 3, 2007 2:23:01 GMT -5
Post by madandfrozen on Apr 3, 2007 2:23:01 GMT -5
I love to write haikus, but it takes me forever to get the wording and the sylable count just right ^^
thanks =)
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Haikus
Apr 3, 2007 5:02:39 GMT -5
Post by Jordy on Apr 3, 2007 5:02:39 GMT -5
Yeah, I've only written one or two. Same here. =) You're welcome.
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Haikus
Apr 3, 2007 15:56:53 GMT -5
Post by Bethany on Apr 3, 2007 15:56:53 GMT -5
I love poetry, but I can't right haikus. :/ Anything I've even tried has been horrible.
But I'm a big fan of short, to the point poems, and this one is completely relatable. XD I give you 5 golden star stickers.
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Haikus
Apr 3, 2007 17:50:21 GMT -5
Post by Jordy on Apr 3, 2007 17:50:21 GMT -5
Same here, Bethany.
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Haikus
Apr 3, 2007 19:03:55 GMT -5
Post by madandfrozen on Apr 3, 2007 19:03:55 GMT -5
yay!!! I love star stickers!!!
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Haikus
Apr 3, 2007 20:30:51 GMT -5
Post by Jordy on Apr 3, 2007 20:30:51 GMT -5
Ha, ha. =)
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Haikus
Jul 18, 2008 10:30:16 GMT -5
Post by burntsmoke on Jul 18, 2008 10:30:16 GMT -5
Haha that haiku is cute I like the second version more I guess cus it's unusual I can't do haikus Or any poetry Spose it's worth a shot
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