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Post by burntsmoke on Sept 30, 2007 8:54:38 GMT -5
I told you this would happen But have you honestly met somebody who just thinks of a crispy clean, perfect plot in two seconds? Anyway, yeah, I have done a lot of plot altering. Basically, Ratu does die, and everyone gets depressed blah blah blah. During this time, though, I have chosen not to bring in Ratu the tiger because he seems to add an unrealistic effect to the story and drags it down a bit. The plot only now briefly meets tigers, and this only occurs at the end in Ethan's later life. Because there is no Ratu the tiger, Ethan moves to England with his grandparents. That's a fairly large chunk of it. Ethan goes to a normal school, meets normal people, lives in a rainy country...It's sorta about a lot of adjusting to a new life. Well, I won't say much more, but that's the jist of it.
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Post by Lady Hammer on Sept 30, 2007 12:42:36 GMT -5
Awww. I'm gonna miss the bittersweetness of Ratu the tiger...
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Post by burntsmoke on Oct 3, 2007 11:33:43 GMT -5
Yeah I'm gonna miss writing about the tiger too But I am definitely going to include tigers somewhere....Lawlz
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Post by burntsmoke on Oct 3, 2007 14:43:00 GMT -5
And I am re-doing the first chapter totally. Like, skipping straight to the death. I don't want Ratu the girl to get too involved...It's more about Ehan's relationships in the present, rather than the past, so some bits really aren't necessary. If you know what I mean. I'd like to find someone who can tell me how to spell necessary. Because I always think I'm spelling it wrong. Heh xD
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