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Sept 12, 2007 10:44:18 GMT -5
Post by burntsmoke on Sept 12, 2007 10:44:18 GMT -5
I want your thoughts on this please Okay so I'm coming to the end of my first chapter, and a girl dies. Should I tell the reader that she is dead by writing about her when she dies or telling it through he mother when she tells the son?? Which do you think is more shocking/climaxing?? Please help!!
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Sept 12, 2007 10:50:10 GMT -5
Post by burntsmoke on Sept 12, 2007 10:50:10 GMT -5
Oh, and also, Ethan is living in Sumatra. Would he sleep under a mosquito net??
Anyone know?
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cloverbud
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Sept 12, 2007 18:35:24 GMT -5
Post by cloverbud on Sept 12, 2007 18:35:24 GMT -5
hmm. i think it would be best to tell it when the mother tells the son. and as for your second question, no idea
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Sept 13, 2007 9:27:35 GMT -5
Post by burntsmoke on Sept 13, 2007 9:27:35 GMT -5
okay thanks
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Sept 13, 2007 9:37:32 GMT -5
Post by mysteria on Sept 13, 2007 9:37:32 GMT -5
Yes, I think he would sleep under a mosquito net.
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Sept 13, 2007 12:33:52 GMT -5
Post by burntsmoke on Sept 13, 2007 12:33:52 GMT -5
thanks
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