Post by hikairi on May 29, 2007 20:11:01 GMT -5
(by the way Hikairi is NOT my name. I just like it.)
Whole Hikairi is a very long, developed, and complicated novel. Here are my two main characters in list form.
Name: Hikairi
Age: Sixteen
Birthday: 1.19.91
Part in book: Main character
Appearance: Black choppy hair, the longest length to her collarbone. Light green eyes, almost white, medium size. (All soulless people have a super light eye color. Since eyes are the window to the soul, and the soul has left, how could there be any real color?) Long eyelashes. Full putty-colored lips. Straight medium sized nose. Almost disgustingly skinny, super tall. (5’9) Not an athletic build (no sports). Mostly clear skin. Skin is always really cold, especially hands. Doesn’t tan very easily, not even in the summer. Wears more classical clothes, not trendy. Almost always wears white, which contrasts with her dark hair too much. Kinda busty. Doesn’t usually wear makeup, although friends always say how she could use some blush. Has ears pierced once. Doesn’t usually wear earrings.
Personality: Keeps to friends. Always the “quiet” one in the group. Has a tight circle of friends, but even they don’t know her secret. They don’t do much outside of school unless it’s a special occasion. (i.e., birthday) Doesn’t usually speak her mind on any matter. Actually, only really talks to her very best friend. Thinks about the universe a lot, and tends to dwell on things a little too long. Over thinks almost everything. Pretty smart when she wants to be. Not really into commitment because she’s afraid of rejection above most things. Would never do anything to draw attention to herself, such as wear bright colors. Very go-with-the-flow kind of girl. Graceful unless distracted, then becomes very clumsy. She’ll do almost anything to keep herself from remembering the constant ache in her chest from where her soul once was. Doesn’t scare or embarrass easily. Witty, but in a sarcastic way, not necessarily an outright funny kind of way.
History: Born in Forks, Washington (rainiest place on earth). Moved to North California when she was three. Really hates the sun there and misses the rain of Washington. When she was nine her parents told her about how a lot of the family had lost their souls in a curse-like way. There was a chance that she could keep her soul, but it gradually went away. Moved down to lower California. Started middle school with no soul left. Became quiet while before she was energetic and chatty.
Likes: Rainy days, thinking, quiet music, writing, old clothing, cats, the ocean, sitting in the dark, reading, rearranging her room, IMing (no talking!)
Dislikes: Loud music, lots of noise, most animals (she finds them a nuisance), super-sunny-super-hot days, TV
Hobbies: Writing poetry, making collages, playing violin
Strengths: Listening, hiding, patience, hand eye coordination
Weaknesses: Talking, running, working in groups, getting a point across (she gets frustrated really fast)
Allergic to: Bees
Nickname(?): Close friends call her Kairi or maybe even ‘Airi. All other students just call her Hikairi
Fears: Rejection, being found out, never being whole, public speaking, being left alone forever
Theme song: 4 In The Morning- Gwen Stefani
Other: Doesn’t feel anything because she has no soul. BUT she does remember what it was like to feel emotion, so her metaphorical heart aches inside of her every time she’s supposed to feel something. Which is kind of a very limited emotion.
Favorites:-Song: Golden- Fall Out Boy
-Movie: Edward Scissorhands
-Color: White
-Food: Skittles
-Season: Autumn
-Book: Le Petit Prince
Sue Score:
2 (not a usual name)
1 (not a usual name)
5 (eyes, but hey, shut up.)
1 (smart-ish)
1 (plays the violin)
8 (likes the same stuff as me- so what?)
1 (does poetry)
Total = 19 (11-20 points: The Non-Sue. Your character is a well-developed, balanced person, and is almost certainly not a Mary Sue. Congratulations!)
Peeves: Things she doesn’t understand, loud noises
Whole Hikairi is a very long, developed, and complicated novel. Here are my two main characters in list form.
Name: Hikairi
Age: Sixteen
Birthday: 1.19.91
Part in book: Main character
Appearance: Black choppy hair, the longest length to her collarbone. Light green eyes, almost white, medium size. (All soulless people have a super light eye color. Since eyes are the window to the soul, and the soul has left, how could there be any real color?) Long eyelashes. Full putty-colored lips. Straight medium sized nose. Almost disgustingly skinny, super tall. (5’9) Not an athletic build (no sports). Mostly clear skin. Skin is always really cold, especially hands. Doesn’t tan very easily, not even in the summer. Wears more classical clothes, not trendy. Almost always wears white, which contrasts with her dark hair too much. Kinda busty. Doesn’t usually wear makeup, although friends always say how she could use some blush. Has ears pierced once. Doesn’t usually wear earrings.
Personality: Keeps to friends. Always the “quiet” one in the group. Has a tight circle of friends, but even they don’t know her secret. They don’t do much outside of school unless it’s a special occasion. (i.e., birthday) Doesn’t usually speak her mind on any matter. Actually, only really talks to her very best friend. Thinks about the universe a lot, and tends to dwell on things a little too long. Over thinks almost everything. Pretty smart when she wants to be. Not really into commitment because she’s afraid of rejection above most things. Would never do anything to draw attention to herself, such as wear bright colors. Very go-with-the-flow kind of girl. Graceful unless distracted, then becomes very clumsy. She’ll do almost anything to keep herself from remembering the constant ache in her chest from where her soul once was. Doesn’t scare or embarrass easily. Witty, but in a sarcastic way, not necessarily an outright funny kind of way.
History: Born in Forks, Washington (rainiest place on earth). Moved to North California when she was three. Really hates the sun there and misses the rain of Washington. When she was nine her parents told her about how a lot of the family had lost their souls in a curse-like way. There was a chance that she could keep her soul, but it gradually went away. Moved down to lower California. Started middle school with no soul left. Became quiet while before she was energetic and chatty.
Likes: Rainy days, thinking, quiet music, writing, old clothing, cats, the ocean, sitting in the dark, reading, rearranging her room, IMing (no talking!)
Dislikes: Loud music, lots of noise, most animals (she finds them a nuisance), super-sunny-super-hot days, TV
Hobbies: Writing poetry, making collages, playing violin
Strengths: Listening, hiding, patience, hand eye coordination
Weaknesses: Talking, running, working in groups, getting a point across (she gets frustrated really fast)
Allergic to: Bees
Nickname(?): Close friends call her Kairi or maybe even ‘Airi. All other students just call her Hikairi
Fears: Rejection, being found out, never being whole, public speaking, being left alone forever
Theme song: 4 In The Morning- Gwen Stefani
Other: Doesn’t feel anything because she has no soul. BUT she does remember what it was like to feel emotion, so her metaphorical heart aches inside of her every time she’s supposed to feel something. Which is kind of a very limited emotion.
Favorites:-Song: Golden- Fall Out Boy
-Movie: Edward Scissorhands
-Color: White
-Food: Skittles
-Season: Autumn
-Book: Le Petit Prince
Sue Score:
2 (not a usual name)
1 (not a usual name)
5 (eyes, but hey, shut up.)
1 (smart-ish)
1 (plays the violin)
8 (likes the same stuff as me- so what?)
1 (does poetry)
Total = 19 (11-20 points: The Non-Sue. Your character is a well-developed, balanced person, and is almost certainly not a Mary Sue. Congratulations!)
Peeves: Things she doesn’t understand, loud noises
