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Post by mysteria on May 16, 2007 23:30:48 GMT -5
As she lay dying there, Ciara thought.
She thought about Sorrel, and whether or not he had finally found peace.
She thought about herself. Had she done the right thing? Probably not.
But it felt right.
She thought about the pack. Would one of them try to avenge her?
She hoped not.
With all of these thoughts floating around in her mind, Ciara closed her eyes for the last time. Her body went stiff, and cold, and her once glowing silver eyes became a dull gray color.
But as the light left her body, someone came to meet her.
Sorrel.
His cold black nose touched hers, before he turned to walk away.
Come with me Ciara... Came the sound of his beautiful voice, the one she had wished for so long to hear once more.
So she went.
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Post by thischaos on May 17, 2007 0:31:55 GMT -5
Simple - but I like itt. (:
Are you planning to write it... backwards? X3 That'd be amusing to see. o:
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creamwolfgurl
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Post by creamwolfgurl on May 17, 2007 1:48:19 GMT -5
yeah, I got confused thinking. "....hold on....thats the end bit..."
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Post by mysteria on May 17, 2007 7:59:46 GMT -5
lol XD no, I just wrote this before I started the rest of the book.
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creamwolfgurl
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Post by creamwolfgurl on May 18, 2007 3:36:41 GMT -5
right.....
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Post by mysteria on May 18, 2007 8:59:47 GMT -5
I know, it sucks... I think I'm going to delete this board.
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absgg911
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Post by absgg911 on May 18, 2007 17:06:47 GMT -5
I like it...write the rest. I was confuzled with you.
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Post by Jesse on May 19, 2007 19:17:03 GMT -5
I like it *grabs whip* Write another chapter Jazzy-kins!
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Post by mysteria on May 19, 2007 19:18:34 GMT -5
kk, I'll post it
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Post by wionasfate on Sept 29, 2007 10:19:50 GMT -5
I like the story, just not the fact that I came up with the name Ciara and you DID NOT ask permission to use it. Am I overreacting?
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Post by Lady Hammer on Sept 29, 2007 11:28:01 GMT -5
Chill, Ciara's a well known name. It's the name of a popular singer, and it's pretty common in California.
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Post by mysteria on Sept 29, 2007 11:31:18 GMT -5
Wiona, you didn't come up with the name Ciara, so stop posting it on my boards. I'm sorry if it offends you that I used it, but... yeah.
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Post by Lady Hammer on Sept 29, 2007 11:32:50 GMT -5
It upsets me that people are starting to use the name "Aislin", a different spelling of the name "Aeslyn" which I've used for my character a hundred billion times. But I deal with it. SO YOU NEED TO DEAL WITH IT TOO.
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