What my story ish 'bout (Summery like thing)

[Ginny]

So theres this teen-aged girl, and shes got her own version of justice. When she doesn't like how someone is acting, she makes it or them pay. Her ultra rich and snobby neighbor annoys her to no end, because he thinks hes better than her just because he inherited a bunch of money. So she pushes his car into the river behind their houses. Instead of just buying a new one, he insists that she pay him for the money or make him forgiver her in some other way. Since she doesn't have much money she gets assigned to go with him on a month-long camping trip to watch his 5-year old cousin while he does fun stuff. Local natives warn them about strange wolves in the area, but since everyone says there are no wolves in these mountains they ignore the chief and everyone. But then the girl is lost, and she thinks she sees a bunch of yellow eyes watching her. As soon as they are gone she can find her way to camp. Totally freaked out by this experience she keeps an eye out for these wolves. Nothing happens, but 2 weeks into the trip the snob dies while bungee jumping. So she and the little girl make their way back to town and get home. Once home life goes on normally, until 2 years later she hears that they are going to burn down the forest that she camped at to replace it with a factory and farm-land. The girl has had many dreams of the eyes, and sometimes the wolves, and has come to believe that they really were there. So she goes back, tries to find the wolves, meets other people who are also trying to save the area, they all search for the wolves... and I'm still trying to decided on the best ending out of like 10 choices.



Wadda think? This is kinda like a rough draft, not really a set in stone summery.

[Ginny]

Hmm.. I don't like the name of my story now. Oh well, if I think of a new name I probably wouldn't like that one ether by tomorrow.

[creamwolfgurl]

I think it'll be a good story, what are the multiple endings you're trying to decide with?

[Ginny]

Well,

1) they could never meet the wolf pack, only see shadows and figures and signs of them but feel a sense of accomplishment or whatever anyway.
2) the pack could come charging in at the last minute and help them out
3) they could meet the pack, become friends and whatnot and work together.
4) the pack of wolves could help them on the side without their knowledge, and then they could meet them in the end.
5) (This ones kinda different) The little girl could of met the pack on their first trip, then come run away to live with them and had been living there for the 2 years. She could be like super strong and everything but not super smart, and could be super optimistic about everything because shes only 7. But then they have to work with her and through her work with the wolves.
6) The wolves turn out to be running away from the danger, but the humans fight anyway.
Erm.. I forgot the other 3 or 4.

[creamwolfgurl]

7. the wolves have disappeared (don't want to die) and the forest is cut down.
jk, I dunno, I don't plan my stories.

[mysteria]

I like it ^^ please post chapter one?

[snowkitty]

Or number 8) The pack disappears but they capture a fleeting glance of it and feel a strange, inward satisfaction at knowing that it exists, and she falls for the neighbor boy (who, mysteriously, has a change of character going from a snobby jerk to a prideful but deep character).

WHOO go Kitty! XD

[creamwolfgurl]

I like it. Hmmm maybe not the neighbour, maybe one of the people helping, who is a mysterious guy that's also mysteriously rich.

[cloverbud]

it sounds good. i like it^^