Post by Jordy on Apr 3, 2007 23:22:36 GMT -5
Ok, I've got more. Here it is so far:
“There it is! Just like I saw in my dream. My closet, a girl saying, ‘There it is’. But, now what? Do I unlock it?”
Victoria glanced down at the key. She didn’t know what would happen. But, why was she getting so worked up about it? What could possibly happen? It’s only a door. And a key. But the key gives her weird feelings in her stomach.
“Just do it Victoria!” She heard herself yell.
Instantly, she shoved the key into the lock.
Victoria watched as the door started to glow. It was like the key had some extraordinary power. And the door, without the key, was worthless, but once the key was entered, it had some inseparable companionship.
She listened as the door started to make rumbling and cracking noises.
“What’s happening?!”
Everything started to slow down and soon it became quiet. Victoria inhaled a deep breath then slowly moved towards the door. She looked inside the window.
“AHHH!!!” She screamed as she pushed her clothes back and closed her closet.
Victoria ran to her bed and shut her eyes. For the first time in her life, her piercing blue eyes turned…not so piercing. They got duller and you could see the worry inside of her heart. You could tell she was scarred. Even her dark brown hair turned plain.
How could she have seen that at the door? It’s not possible. Her father was dead. That couldn’t have been his eye. I’m hallucinating! Victoria told herself.
She got up and slowly walked towards her closet. As she opened the doors and pushed her clothes away, she took a step towards the door. She looked inside the window. And……….
Saw nothing. She took the key out and opened the door.
Victoria peeked her head inside the door and saw a big white room.
She climbed inside. The door slammed shut behind her. She jumped nearly a foot in the air and screamed.
“Who’s here?!” Victoria demanded.
“I SAID, Who’s here?!” She repeated.
“Relax….” A voice came from above. “I’m not here to hurt you. I want to help you.”
Victoria was freaked out. She didn’t say a word. All she did was run. Back to the door. It disapeered.
“Let me out!!” She screamed above her.
She sat down, exhausted. The voice had gone away and she was stuck in a big, white room. With nothing in it. She hesitantly looked around.
She spotted a stand. How come she had never seen it before? Victoria slowly got up, walking towards the stand. There was a envelope which read Victoria on the front. Inside was a letter for her:
Victoria,
By now, if you are here, you have found the key. And the door. Congratulations. Ahead of you lies a journey. A long, long journey. But, if you are determined, and work at it hard enough, your reward will be….worth your while. Many puzzles and difficult times lay in front of you. But I promise you, you reward will be to your liking. I wish I could make it easier for you to have this reward…but I can’t. I will be caught. But, I may warn you, there are a lot of people trying to stop me from helping you. That’s why I have to do it this way. But, still because of the people trying to help me, you’re journey will be hard……
“There it is! Just like I saw in my dream. My closet, a girl saying, ‘There it is’. But, now what? Do I unlock it?”
Victoria glanced down at the key. She didn’t know what would happen. But, why was she getting so worked up about it? What could possibly happen? It’s only a door. And a key. But the key gives her weird feelings in her stomach.
“Just do it Victoria!” She heard herself yell.
Instantly, she shoved the key into the lock.
Victoria watched as the door started to glow. It was like the key had some extraordinary power. And the door, without the key, was worthless, but once the key was entered, it had some inseparable companionship.
She listened as the door started to make rumbling and cracking noises.
“What’s happening?!”
Everything started to slow down and soon it became quiet. Victoria inhaled a deep breath then slowly moved towards the door. She looked inside the window.
“AHHH!!!” She screamed as she pushed her clothes back and closed her closet.
Victoria ran to her bed and shut her eyes. For the first time in her life, her piercing blue eyes turned…not so piercing. They got duller and you could see the worry inside of her heart. You could tell she was scarred. Even her dark brown hair turned plain.
How could she have seen that at the door? It’s not possible. Her father was dead. That couldn’t have been his eye. I’m hallucinating! Victoria told herself.
She got up and slowly walked towards her closet. As she opened the doors and pushed her clothes away, she took a step towards the door. She looked inside the window. And……….
Saw nothing. She took the key out and opened the door.
Victoria peeked her head inside the door and saw a big white room.
She climbed inside. The door slammed shut behind her. She jumped nearly a foot in the air and screamed.
“Who’s here?!” Victoria demanded.
“I SAID, Who’s here?!” She repeated.
“Relax….” A voice came from above. “I’m not here to hurt you. I want to help you.”
Victoria was freaked out. She didn’t say a word. All she did was run. Back to the door. It disapeered.
“Let me out!!” She screamed above her.
She sat down, exhausted. The voice had gone away and she was stuck in a big, white room. With nothing in it. She hesitantly looked around.
She spotted a stand. How come she had never seen it before? Victoria slowly got up, walking towards the stand. There was a envelope which read Victoria on the front. Inside was a letter for her:
Victoria,
By now, if you are here, you have found the key. And the door. Congratulations. Ahead of you lies a journey. A long, long journey. But, if you are determined, and work at it hard enough, your reward will be….worth your while. Many puzzles and difficult times lay in front of you. But I promise you, you reward will be to your liking. I wish I could make it easier for you to have this reward…but I can’t. I will be caught. But, I may warn you, there are a lot of people trying to stop me from helping you. That’s why I have to do it this way. But, still because of the people trying to help me, you’re journey will be hard……