HELP - again

[Lady Hammer]

'K so does anyone know how I can make my first chapter more... I dunno... exciting? Nothing's really going on. It's just so blah, and it starts of where you getta see what weirdo Aeslyn is. And that's all that happens.


Any ideas? :/ I was told my first chapter was boring. And I agree.

[Jesse]

I'm not sure what you could really do to make the first chapter more exciting. It did it's part in introducing the main characters and setting up for the next chapters. I'm sure there's something you can do that I'm not seeing but really, I don't see any reason to change alot of it.