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Post by Lady Hammer on Apr 30, 2007 22:29:45 GMT -5
FSCK FSCK FSCK FSCK FSCK FSCK!!!!!!!!! ARRRRRHHHH!!!!! *is angry* *apparently*  WTFFFFF HOW COULD I HAVE MISSED THIS!??!?! *throws Scene Index all over the place and screams madly* Shame on me for not being thorough enough! AND I THOUGHT I WAS BEING DAMN THOROUGH! *stomps all over the Scene Index* ;_; Okay you can ignore me now. |
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Post by Jesse on Apr 30, 2007 22:31:10 GMT -5
WTH was that for? Just wondering. Why are you being angry?
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Post by Lady Hammer on Apr 30, 2007 22:32:19 GMT -5
I'm sorry, don't mind me double posting at all... ARRRRRRGHHH!!! I WAS DOING SO GOOD TOO! IT'S JUST SUCH A STUPID MISTAKE!!! HOW COULD I HAVE *MISSED* IT!!  !?!?!??!?!??!? It was just ONE DAMN DAY. I shoulda read the original more thoroughlly before I wrote the whole Index. So now I gotta go rewrite the WHOLE FRICKIN' THING. *tosses the whole story out the window* Forget it. D:< |
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Post by Jesse on Apr 30, 2007 22:33:25 GMT -5
Eh? What did you do wrong? *is confuzeled*
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Post by Lady Hammer on Apr 30, 2007 22:40:46 GMT -5
In the original days, there was a span of two days between the drawing of a new event. In the new Scene Index, which is an outlined summary of the entire book and is HELLAZ LONG AND THAT I DONTWANTTOREWRITE, I totally FORGOT the time needed to condone this new event, and I fscked up there. It's nighttime in the current setting, and an event was supposed to take place in the morning, but I forgot to put it down in the Index, and yeah... so now the days are all messed up and I can't fix it without drastically altering the rest of the story.
Which there's no way in hell I'm gonna do. After all that work I put into the index, I REFUSE to accept that there is a fatal error in it.
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Post by Jesse on Apr 30, 2007 22:43:07 GMT -5
That sucks. Ummm, I suggest just going with it
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Post by Lady Hammer on Apr 30, 2007 22:49:14 GMT -5
That's what I'm thinking I'll just have to do. At least it'll put more of a stressful mood in, I guess, if nothing else happens...
*shrug*
Hrm.
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Post by Lady Hammer on May 4, 2007 22:21:26 GMT -5
EXCUSE THE DOUBLE POST.
So damn I have another problem.
So I fixed the one with the dates, because there were a few open days that got skipped over, like from the 19th to the 22nd where nothing happened, so I'll just start chapter 12 (did I say 11? Silly me) on the 21st. Nothing happens so I don't think it'll hurt the plot in any way, I'll just have to watch my wording if I refer to the time between as more than two days or something. That's all.
HOWEVER... once again looking at my Scene Index, I found out that my stupid idiot self crammed everything that was supposed to happen in the course of two days (because originally in the 1st verison of Black Lotus, this event took two days) into ONE CHAPTER. So chapter 12 is gonna be HELLZA LONG.
LIKE HELLZA.
LIKE EFFIN 17 PAGES. JUST FOR ONE CHAPTER.
THAT'S LONG.
But I dunno if I want to risk breaking it up into two chapters, because I already ended everything in a nice and neat 40 chapters. 41 would seem like "oh wow she was so close!" and then I'd be a failure. T_T
But I dunno. DAMMIT I JUST DON'T KNOW! *shakes a baby*
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Post by Jesse on May 4, 2007 22:28:41 GMT -5
*Takes away the baby* Poor thing. Long chapters are fine, I hate having to break up good chapters and disrupt the flow. It just doesn't seem to work as well. I'm sure no one will mind if it's loooooooooooong, as long as it works well.
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Post by Maggie on May 27, 2007 15:01:47 GMT -5
Hey! I like long chapters! Then, if you're really into the book and your mom or someone says to stop reading, you can say: okay, just lemme finish this chapter! Haha! If it's long you can keep reading!
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Post by mysteria on May 28, 2007 10:57:26 GMT -5
poor Lady XD I like your book. Personally, I don't think it matters much whether you have 40 chapters or 41. ^^
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