Post by wionasfate on Jun 23, 2007 10:30:52 GMT -5
hehe. Yes, rhythm is a hard thing to find, but when I write a poem I will not rest until it has good rhythm. So, good job!
You say you deal in thruth and not in lies, but behind your back lay fingers crossed away from piercing eyes. You lied to me I know you did, Why don't you tell the truth and stop acting like a little kid?