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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 2, 2007 14:32:35 GMT -5
A wolfy ran through the wood
being good like she knew she should.
But something fell out
of the sky's water spout
and it hit her on the head.
"What is that?" She said
"That has bumped my head?"
And made me run all about?
I am not sure, but I think it had fled
from that huge water spout!"
Nearby an owl heard her fuss
"What is wrong?" he said
"Something fell out
of the big water spout,
and it hit me on the head!"
"Silly wolf!" The owl hooted
"I merely pooted!"
"Eww! She said.
"What a disgusting thing to fall on my head."
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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 2, 2007 14:32:56 GMT -5
The end ^^
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Post by Lady Hammer on Apr 2, 2007 14:39:51 GMT -5
lol. How cute and... bizarre. ^^ Very darling.
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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 2, 2007 14:44:45 GMT -5
Thanks ^^ I wrote it last night while I was bored ^^
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Post by Jordy on Apr 2, 2007 15:32:13 GMT -5
Hm, not really my style. But I know of a few author's who write in that style and that would sure make their top. ^^ nice job.
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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 2, 2007 15:35:57 GMT -5
Thanks Jordy ^^
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Post by Bethany on Apr 3, 2007 15:59:00 GMT -5
Lol. That's cute. You get two thumbs up.
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Post by Jordy on Apr 3, 2007 17:50:40 GMT -5
You're welcome. =)
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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 3, 2007 19:03:28 GMT -5
thanks bethany!
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Post by Jordy on Apr 3, 2007 20:31:21 GMT -5
It is very cute though, madandfrozen. By the way, what is your name? What can I call you?
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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 4, 2007 4:11:57 GMT -5
I am known as Jaz, Jazzy, or Jazmin. ^^
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Post by creamwolfgurl on Apr 7, 2007 2:04:08 GMT -5
((that's cool. I apparently (according to dad) write in a dark style. So in my story, someone will probably die.
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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 7, 2007 13:26:15 GMT -5
thanks ^^ lol
my dad says most teens write in that dark style. Besides, Steven King writes like that and look at how famous he is! So I find nothing wrong with it ^^
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Post by Lady Hammer on Apr 7, 2007 16:31:57 GMT -5
I make people die all the time. Well not all the time.
Well maybe I do. Bethany can be the judge of that. She knows how I write. I have killed off a good number of people, though. It's all for suspense and shock. ^^
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Post by madandfrozen on Apr 7, 2007 17:40:49 GMT -5
I don't mind when characters die unless I absolutley LOVE the character. Then the author shall die!
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