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Post by Lady Hammer on Oct 14, 2007 16:25:58 GMT -5
Next question:
Do all that you can to describe your character's eyes. Use metaphors, similes, personification - whatever literary devices it takes. Feel free to be as cheesy, corny, and cliche as you want.
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creamwolfgurl
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A moonlit plain~a flash in the shadows~Lunar is winging across the Moon
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Post by creamwolfgurl on Oct 15, 2007 0:17:38 GMT -5
Holly's eyes~ uh, the best way to decribe them is a phrase I found in a book 'vivid Celtic blue, sharp as lasers and ....I forget the rest. Nut they are really, really blue and go the colour of Texas Bluebonnets (a type of flower) when she's annoyed, hacked off, pissed off, irritated like hell....
And Micky's eyes are slightly darker, slightly deeper and they often have a dreamy expression in them (which is coupled with a grin, most often) which makes him look softer and cute, but he has an edge to him, which you can kinda see in his eyes, especially coz he notices pretty much everything, even with that dreamy expression.
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Post by The Pilot on Oct 17, 2007 10:17:04 GMT -5
I think I quoted myself on that in Nori's bio..
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Pyre
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Post by Pyre on Oct 17, 2007 19:36:11 GMT -5
Do all that you can to describe your character's eyes.
Rye's eyes are exceptionally green and large. They are almost fawn-like in their size, wet-looking and sweet. When she's upset- angry or sad- they turn a lighter shade of green, nearly too bright to look at, a neon colour.
Tom's are pinkish, almond-shaped and ever-changing. One minute you look at his eyes and they seem like ongoing black spirals, the next they are squinty pink, then they are a salmon-shade, round and innocent. However, when Tom is angry, they turn crimson red. If you can see that his eyes are blood red, most likely that's the last thing you will see (:
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