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Post by mysteria on May 25, 2007 22:54:38 GMT -5
I realize ^^ I like it spelt that way ^^ Besides, only Kelly calls her that. Drake calls her little J.J. (for Jessica Juante') and the rest just call her Jessica ^^
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Post by creamwolfgurl on May 26, 2007 17:16:46 GMT -5
Um...my friend keeps saying she knows 10 different Jess/Jesse/Jessie's. literally.
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Post by wionasfate on May 26, 2007 18:04:36 GMT -5
I LOVE THIS!!!
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Post by Maggie on May 27, 2007 13:49:42 GMT -5
OMG good job, Jazzie! Keep going!
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Post by creamwolfgurl on May 28, 2007 1:54:47 GMT -5
write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write! write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write! write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write! write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write! write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!write!
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Post by creamwolfgurl on May 28, 2007 2:18:29 GMT -5
NOOO!! Drake, you dumbass, talk to her *whines* or talk to him!!! GO ON!!! *pushes*
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Post by mysteria on May 28, 2007 10:53:59 GMT -5
Mwahahahahahahaha!
Everything important happens in February ^^
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Post by snowkitty on May 28, 2007 20:33:11 GMT -5
So, who's Kristi? And Tora?
I mean, in Kitty's Very Ordinary World?
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Post by mysteria on May 28, 2007 20:41:02 GMT -5
Well, Kristi doesn't really exist. Tora is Courtney.
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Post by Lady Hammer on May 29, 2007 15:33:03 GMT -5
It's good, but I have one small complaint -
You NEED to do a more intimate describing of your main character's friends in the beginning and maybe have her introduce herself a little better to her new companion, this diary of hers.
;D That's all. Just trying to give you some advice that an English teacher or Creative Writing teacher would give you. It's fiction, so it's okay for your main character to go over the top when introducing herself. After all, her diary is portrayed as her new best friend. ^^ Supposedly. At least that's the common symbol for a diary.
But good so far. I like it. :3
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Post by mysteria on May 29, 2007 18:37:22 GMT -5
Thanks ^^ I'll fix it in editing
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Post by creamwolfgurl on Jun 1, 2007 20:24:39 GMT -5
i like this story.
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Post by absgg911 on Jun 8, 2007 21:47:06 GMT -5
Okay, after reading through March I have one thing to say. WRITE MORE!!! I was writing my story today while listening to my ipod and The Music of the Night came on. I was like, must see if jazzie has posted more on her story. It made me think of it because of the parts where Drake does things from the movie, like the rose ;D
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Post by mysteria on Jun 8, 2007 22:15:12 GMT -5
thanks, lol XD
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Post by hikairi on Jun 17, 2007 23:16:25 GMT -5
Sad... I LOVE IT!
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